Do I feel that I have to work hard and be miserable now in order to be happy later?
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I absolutely don\'t agree with it.
>> CORRECT
We don\'t know what\'s gonna happen in the future and we can\'t live the way we planned.
>> CORRECT (Wow! You\'re right!)
Nobody guarantees something is going to happen in the future and what I am doing now is helpful later.
>> Nobody guarantees something is going to happen in the future and what I am doing now will be helpful later on.
And, if I live only for the future, I won\'t happy in the future because I will have to prepare much later.
>> Also, if I only live for the future, I won\'t be happy in the future because I will have to prepare much later on.
So, probably I will just continue preparing the future and can\'t enjoy the moment of present.
>> So, probably I will just continue preparing the future and can\'t enjoy the present moment.
But, I think the present is the most important time because we live here and now.
>> However, I think the present is the most important time because we live here and now. (Indeed!)
We can\'t live in the future or in the past we just can live now.
>> We can\'t live in the future or in the past we can just live now.
Thus, If I really want to be happy, it is important to feel happy now and do what I want to now.
>> Thus, if I really want to be happy, it is important to feel happy now and do what I want now.
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