Do I feel that I have to work hard and be miserable now in order to be happy later?

2018-11-29 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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I absolutely don't agree with it. We don't know what's gonna happen in the future and we can't live the way we planned. Nobody guarantees something is going to happen in the future and what I am doing now is helpful later. And, if I live only for the future, I won't happy in the future because I will have to prepare much later. So, probably I will just continue preparing the future and can't enjoy the moment of present. But, I think the present is the most important time because we live here and now. We can't live in the future or in the past we just can live now. Thus, If I really want to be happy, it is important to feel happy now and do what I want to now.

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I absolutely don\'t agree with it.

>> CORRECT


We don\'t know what\'s gonna happen in the future and we can\'t live the way we planned.

>> CORRECT (Wow! You\'re right!)


Nobody guarantees something is going to happen in the future and what I am doing now is helpful later.

>> Nobody guarantees something is going to happen in the future and what I am doing now will be helpful later on.


And, if I live only for the future, I won\'t happy in the future because I will have to prepare much later.

>> Also, if I only live for the future, I won\'t be happy in the future because I will have to prepare much later on.


So, probably I will just continue preparing the future and can\'t enjoy the moment of present.

>> So, probably I will just continue preparing the future and can\'t enjoy the present moment.


But, I think the present is the most important time because we live here and now.

>> However, I think the present is the most important time because we live here and now. (Indeed!)


We can\'t live in the future or in the past we just can live now.

>> We can\'t live in the future or in the past we can just live now.


Thus, If I really want to be happy, it is important to feel happy now and do what I want to now.

>> Thus, if I really want to be happy, it is important to feel happy now and do what I want now.


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