Do I have any childhood friendships that are still strong today?

2018-10-22 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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I don\'t have any childhood friendships that are still strong today because I moved to another place very often. So, I went to different school from childhood friends. The longest friendship that I still have is with middle school friends. I have met 6 friends since I was in university. I can meet them by chance since one of them got in touch with me. However, we can\'t meet very often because we are all busy and working at different situation. One of them is a teacher like me, another is a singer, others are looking for the jobs. So, we meet altogether twice or three times a year. But, I meet some of them more frequently because we talk about the book which we promised to read when we meet. I meet them once a month or once every two months. The purpose of meeting is book\'s topic but we also talk about our jobs, friends, fassion and so on, and go shopping together. It is very fun and I don\'t know the reason exactly, but I think it is because they are so comfortable.

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I don\'t have any childhood friendships that are still strong today because I moved to another place very often.

>> I don\'t have any childhood friendships that are still strong today because I move to places very often.

So, I went to different school from childhood friends.

>> So, I went to different schools away from my childhood friends.

The longest friendship that I still have is with middle school friends.

>> CORRECT

I have met 6 friends since I was in university.

>> CORRECT

I can meet them by chance since one of them got in touch with me.

>> CORRECT

>> I can meet them by chance since one of them kept in touch with me.

However, we can\'t meet very often because we are all busy and working at different situation.

>> However, we can\'t meet very often because we are all busy and working.

One of them is a teacher like me, another is a singer, others are looking for the jobs.

>> One of them is a teacher like me, another is a singer, others are looking for jobs.

So, we meet altogether twice or three times a year. But, I meet some of them more frequently because we talk about the book which we promised to read when we meet.

>> So, we meet altogether twice or three times a year but I meet some of them more frequently because we talk about the book which we promised to read when we meet.

I meet them once a month or once every two months.

>> CORRECT

The purpose of meeting is book\'s topic but we also talk about our jobs, friends, fassion and so on, and go shopping together.

>> The purpose of meeting is talking about some books\' topics but we also talk about our jobs, friends, fashion and so on and go shopping together afterwards.

It is very fun and I don\'t know the reason exactly, but I think it is because they are so comfortable.

>> It is very fun and I don\'t know the reason exactly, but I think it is because they are so comfortable to be with.

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