Do I have had nightmare?
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I usually forget the dream immediately after I wake up.
>> I usually forget my dreams right after I wake up.
But, I still remember a dream about the war which I had last year.
>> However, I still remember a dream about the war which I had last year.
I was at my university with some people who were in the same class with me.
>> CORRECT
When I was talking to them, I heard a bomb explode.
>> CORRECT
We were so panic and scary.
>> We were scared and we panicked.
I looked up the sky and saw that lots of missile and bombs were approaching.
>> CORRECT
So, we ran away screaming.
>> CORRECT
I hide into the building with my friends and tried to call my mother.
>> I hid in the building with my friends and I tried to call my mother.
But, I couldn\'t get in touch with her so I sent a message asking she is okay.
>> However, I couldn\'t get in touch with her so I sent a message asking if she\'s okay.
Then, I tried to calm down myself and friends but it was very hard.
>> Then, I tried to calm myself and my friends down but it was very hard.
The last scene I saw is that a nuclear bomb flying toward us and I woke up.
>> The last scene I saw was that a nuclear bomb was flying toward us and I woke up.
It was a vivid nightmare so I was scary a little bit.
>> It was a vivid nightmare so I was a little bit scared.
I was worried about the world war last year and I think that is why I had this dream.
>> CORRECT
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