Do I listen to classical music?
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I don\'t listen to classical music.
>> CORRECT
First, it is boring.
>> CORRECT
I haven\'t underdtood yet why people feel relief while listening to classical music.
>> I don\'t understand why people feel relieved while listening to classical music.
I\'m bored while listening to it because classical music usually plays for longer time than other songs such as k-pop.
>> I feel bored while listening to it because classical music is usually longer than other songs such as k-pop.
Second, I can\'t figure out a meaning of the classical music.
>> Second, I can\'t figure out the meaning of any classical songs.
I can\'t understand what it would like to say.
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The public songs have a definite topic such as love, myself, success an so on.
>> The public songs have a definite topic such as love, myself, success, and so on.
But it is difficult for me to feel the topic of classical music.
>> However, it is difficult for me to feel the topic the classical songs.
As a result, I don\'t like listening to the classical music.
>> As a result, I don\'t like listening to classical music.
>> OR: Ergo, I don\'t like listening to classical music.
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