Do I think people in our country are generally happy people?
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I think people in our country are'nt happy people. Because people in our country are very busy and have much stress. Also in our country there is many poor people. I think in our country people are'nt happy.
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I think people in our country are\'nt happy people. Because people in our country are very busy and have much stress. Also in our country there is many poor people. I think in our country people are\'nt happy.
I think people in our country aren\'t happy people because Koreans are very busy and they work a lot, as a result, they have much stress. There are also many poor people in Korea so I don\'t think Koreans are generally happy people.
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