Do I think people should have cosmetic surgery to enhance their looks?

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I don\'t think so.

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We can enhance our looks by makeup, chaging hair style that looks nice with me, exercise or getting massage.

>> We can enhance our looks by putting makeup on, changing our hair styles, exercising and getting a massage.

However, if appearance affects daily life, I think cosmetic surgery is needed on some levels.

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Nevertheless, no matter how they look, who satisfied with their looks will be happy and who doesn\'t will be unhappy.

>> Nevertheless, no matter how they look, people who are satisfied with their looks will be happy and who don\'t will be unhappy.

It depends on one\'s mind to being satisfied with one\'s appearance.

>> It depends on one\'s mind when it comes to being satisfied with one\'s appearance.

If I consider my weakness as only weakness without trying to change or develop, it will be my weakness forever.

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However, if I consider weakness as not weakness, it will be not weakness anymore.

>> However, if I consider weakness as not weakness, it won\'t be weakness anymore.

Besides, if I always compare to other\'s looks, I would be afflicted.

>> Besides, if I always compare my looks to others, I would be afflicted.

So, I think that the best way to enhace my look is to consider my weakness as another way and overcome that.

>> So, I think that the best way to enhance my looks is to consider my weakness as another way and overcome that.