Do Korean men cry?

I think that it seems both men and women, not only for Koreans, also for others, cannot cry. In other words, people might have to lose it, when they are grown up. When I see my niece, who is three years old, she used to burst into cry whenever she wants to do or get something. However, nowadays, those situations happen lesser, because she might starts realizing that there are cases that parents do not help her solve it anymore. If you totally understand that no one cannot help us though you complain and cry while you are in trouble, and overcome it on your own, then, you could be called as an adult. It sounds a bit sad, but we cannot survive with being naive. In addition, this is the reason that I have to learn more about the cruel world, to be an adult.

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Do Korean men cry?

I think that it seems both men and women, not only for Koreans, also for others, cannot cry.

>>It seems that both men and women, not only for Koreans but also for other nationalities, do not cry.

or>>I think that all men and women, not only for the Koreans but also for the other nationalities, cannot seem to cry.

In other words, people might have to lose it, when they are grown up.

>>In other words, people might have to lose it when they are grown up, before they can shed a tear about something.

When I see my niece, who is three years old, she used to burst into cry whenever she wants to do or get something.

>>When I see my niece, who is three years old, she used to burst into tears and cry loudly whenever she wants to do or get something.

However, nowadays, those situations happen lesser, because she might starts realizing that there are cases that parents do not help her solve it anymore.

>>However, nowadays, those situations happen lesser, because she may have realized that that there are cases where her parents will not help her solve something anymore.

If you totally understand that no one cannot help us though you complain and cry while you are in trouble, and overcome it on your own, then, you could be called as an adult.

>>If you totally understand that no one cannot help you, though you complain and cry when you are in trouble, but you try to overcome it on your own, then, you could be called an adult.

It sounds a bit sad, but we cannot survive with being naive.

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or>>It can be a little sad, but naivety will not help a person survive.

In addition, this is the reason that I have to learn more about the cruel world, to be an adult.

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or>>In conclusion, this is the main thing why I have to learn more about the cruel world we live in, that is to become a full grown adult.