Do many people in your country study abroad? Why do you think they study abroad?

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Here are my corrections for you:

I think many people study abroad in Korea, because Korea is not a English using country. 

>> I think many people in Korea study abroad because Korea is not an English speaking country. 

And I think there are good things about studying abroad. 

>> I think there are good things about studying abroad. 

For example, we can learn English more easier and there can be a thing that our country have must learn from other country. 

>> For example, we can learn English easier and there can be some things that our country must learn from other countries. 

But most of all I think because it is effective. 

>> But most of all,  I think because it is effective. 

And good thing is that we can make native friends in that country. 

>> Another good thing is that we can make friends that are native in that country. 

For example, I have a friend named Steven, who is from Canada.

>> I have a friend named Steven who is from Canada.