Do memories hinder or help people in their effort to learn from the past and succeed in the present?

2014-07-09 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Both facts of the matter can be true. It is usually how we deals with those thoughts and processes them. We can have a horrible thing happen to us and depending on how we process and use that information, the outcome can be very different. They can be true for happy memories as well. We, humans, make mistakes and learn from them because we remember them. Otherwise, we will keep making the same mistake. Even an animal also reacts in the same way. However, we sometimes suffer from bad memories. There are things that we have to forget as time goes by, however, we can have a difficult time because the memory keeps bothering us. Memories that can be painful can also help shape our talents and survival skills. It's important to embrace our memories and make peace with them. Memories are obviously necessary for people to learn from their past. Without memory insight could not last for more than an instant, and humanity would be doomed to repeat its mistakes indefinitely.

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Hi Sir [이름]! You are definitiely right. ^^ We should always find time ro look back on the past to learn a lot of things. Good memories should be treasured forever while, bad memories will be a guide for us. We should always be positive in dealing different circumstances. The way we handle them is also a factor for us to make decisions. We shouldn\'t be scared to learn and commit mistakes as well. A marvelous composition of yours. Thanks! Can\'t wait to hear more of your ideas in class. Teacher Nina   Both facts of the matter can be true. >> Correct! It is usually how we deals with those thoughts and processes them. >> It is usually how we deal with those thoughts and process them. We can have a horrible thing happen to us and depending on how we process and use that information, the outcome can be very different. >> Correct! >> OR: We can experience bad things and depending on how we take it and use those information, the oucome can be very different. They can be true for happy memories as well. >> Correct! We, humans, make mistakes and learn from them because we remember them. >> Correct! Otherwise, we will keep making the same mistake. >> Correct! >> OR: Otherwise, we will repeat the same mistakes. Even an animal also reacts in the same way. \\ >> Correct! However, we sometimes suffer from bad memories. >> Correct! There are things that we have to forget as time goes by, however, we can have a difficult time because the memory keeps bothering us. >> Correct! Memories that can be painful can also help shape our talents and survival skills. >> Correct! >> OR: Memories that can hurt us can help us be a better person. It\'s important to embrace our memories and make peace with them. >> Correct! Memories are obviously necessary for people to learn from their past. >> Correct! Without memory insight could not last for more than an instant, and humanity would be doomed to repeat its mistakes indefinitely. >> Correct!

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