Do men or women talk more on the phone? Why?

2019-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 Selene

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I think women talk more on the phone more than men. I\'m a woman and I have women\'s friends more than men\'s. I usually talk on the phone women. They\'re ofter say nothing speacial. Although it is not important, They call and talk long time. On the contrary, Men doesn\'t like call I think. Men call to say important thing not nothing speacial. That\'s why I think women talk more on the phone.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kate!^^

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I think women talk more on the phone more than men.

>>>I think women talk more on the phone than men.

I\'m a woman and I have women\'s friends more than men\'s.

>>>I\'m a woman and I have women friends more than men.

I usually talk on the phone women.

>>> I usually talk on the phone with women.

They\'re ofter say nothing speacial.

>>> They often say nothing special.

Although it is not important, They call and talk long time.

>>> Although it is not important, they call me and we talk for a long time.

On the contrary, Men doesn\'t like call I think.

>>>On the contrary, I think men don\'t like talking on the phone.

Men call to say important thing not nothing speacial.

>>> Men call to say important things not the special ones.

 


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