Do most experiences in our lives become valuable lessons for the future?
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It is true that most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. There is no easy life for everyone. Life has ups and downs. Some difficulties or situation come our life without an exception. Everyone encounters challenges in his/her long journey even if they seem to be a relatively less severe one compared with others’. The pain that you think you cannot tolerate now could be a fundament to make you become a much greater person when you overcome it. Hardship makes us stronger and we all learn from experience. Hardship makes people realize how to cherish and compliment the common but wonderful little things happened in our life such as a shining weather, a delicious dinner and etc. Although it is painful at the moment, we could talk about the experience someday over a glass of beer, boasting your victory. Experiences in our lives help us to lead a better life and teach us valuable lessons.
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Hello Sir [이름]!
It\'s the start of a brand new week again!
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Teacher Nina
It is true that most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future.
>> Correct!
There is no easy life for everyone.
>> Correct!
Life has ups and downs.
>> Correct!
Some difficulties or situation come our life without an exception.
>> Some difficulties or situations come in our life without exception.
Everyone encounters challenges in his/her long journey even if they seem to be a relatively less severe one compared with others’.
>> Correct!
The pain that you think you cannot tolerate now could be a fundament to make you become a much greater person when ou overcome it.
>> Did you mean: The pain that you are feeling now that makes you think you can\'t tolerate it, can be fundamental to make you a better person when you overcome it.
Hardship makes us stronger and we all learn from experience.
>> Correct
>> OR: Hardship makes us stronger and we all learn from our experiences.
Hardship makes people realize how to cherish and compliment the common but wonderful little things happened in our life such as a shining weather, a delicious dinner and etc.
>> Did you mean: Hardship makes people realize how to cherish and compliment the common but wonderful little things happened in our life such as a shiny weather, a delicious dinner, etc.
>> OR: It also makes people realize to be thankful for the little things that happened in our life such as a sunny weather, delicious food, etc.
Although it is painful at the moment, we could talk about the experience someday over a glass of beer, boasting your victory.
>> Although it is painful at the moment, we could talk about the experience we had someday over a glass of beer, boasting your victory.
Experiences in our lives help us to lead a better life and teach us valuable lessons.
>> Experiences in our lives teaches us valuable lessons and ways how to lead our life.
>> OR: Experiences in our lives helps us to have a better and meaningful life
It\'s the start of a brand new week again!
How was your weekend? I hope that you had a marvelous time with your family.
I am so happy to receive an essay from you today. ^^ Nice job!
Your composition inspired me! I hope that most of the people have the positive outlook towards life like you.
Thank you for making me smile. ^^ See you in class!
Teacher Nina
It is true that most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future.
>> Correct!
There is no easy life for everyone.
>> Correct!
Life has ups and downs.
>> Correct!
Some difficulties or situation come our life without an exception.
>> Some difficulties or situations come in our life without exception.
Everyone encounters challenges in his/her long journey even if they seem to be a relatively less severe one compared with others’.
>> Correct!
The pain that you think you cannot tolerate now could be a fundament to make you become a much greater person when ou overcome it.
>> Did you mean: The pain that you are feeling now that makes you think you can\'t tolerate it, can be fundamental to make you a better person when you overcome it.
Hardship makes us stronger and we all learn from experience.
>> Correct
>> OR: Hardship makes us stronger and we all learn from our experiences.
Hardship makes people realize how to cherish and compliment the common but wonderful little things happened in our life such as a shining weather, a delicious dinner and etc.
>> Did you mean: Hardship makes people realize how to cherish and compliment the common but wonderful little things happened in our life such as a shiny weather, a delicious dinner, etc.
>> OR: It also makes people realize to be thankful for the little things that happened in our life such as a sunny weather, delicious food, etc.
Although it is painful at the moment, we could talk about the experience someday over a glass of beer, boasting your victory.
>> Although it is painful at the moment, we could talk about the experience we had someday over a glass of beer, boasting your victory.
Experiences in our lives help us to lead a better life and teach us valuable lessons.
>> Experiences in our lives teaches us valuable lessons and ways how to lead our life.
>> OR: Experiences in our lives helps us to have a better and meaningful life
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