Do most people in your country prefer traditional medicine, modern medicine, or a combination of the
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People in my country prefer different type of medicine each. Some people eat modern medicine because the modern medicine is made recently. And the other people drink traditional medicine because you can eat it easily. So, I don\'t know which one is more popular.
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People in my country prefer different type of medicine each.
>> People in my country prefer different types of medicine each.
Some people eat modern medicine because the modern medicine is made recently.
>> Some people take western medicine because it is made with the use of modern technology.
And the other people drink traditional medicine because you can eat it easily.
>> And others take traditional or oriental medicine because you can have it easily.
So, I don\'t know which one is more popular.
>> correct
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