Do most people in your country prefer traditional medicine, modern medicine, or a combination of the
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Most people in my country prefer modern medicine. Because now they don\'t believe traditional medicine. Of course we use the traditional medicine. But most people died that followed it. Actually, I think modern medicine is good for my disease has been get better.
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Hi, Daisy.
Thank you for sharing your opinion with me about modern and traditional medicine in your place. Your grandma is a legend. ^_^ See you later in class, dear!
~Teacher Erin
Most people in my country prefer modern medicine.
>>CORRECT
Because now they don\'t believe traditional medicine.
>>Because now they don\'t believe in traditional medicine.
Of course we use the traditional medicine.
>> Of course, we still use traditional medicine.
But most people died that followed it.
>>But most of the people that use traditional medicine are dead.
Actually, I think modern medicine is good for my disease has been get better.
>>Actually, I think modern medicine is good because I feel better when I take some of it.
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