Do most people only value the things that we work hard for?
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Hi, [이름]!
Happy Friday to us! ^^
Thank you for sharing your opinion about this topic.
I think what you said is true.
Most people nowadays only value the material things and forget about the things that matter the most.
It\'s sad but it\'s true.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great.
See you in class later. ^^
~Teacher Charry :)
I think most people only value for the things that we work hard.
>> I think most people only value the things that they work hard for.
First of all,when most people come down with big disease, they say that healthy is the most important thing in their life.
>> First of all, when most people come down with a big disease, they say that health is the most important thing in their lives.
Usually healthy is given to the young but they receive it wlthout appreciation.
>> Usually, health is achieved when people are young but they receive it without appreciation.
After losing it, when they get old, they realize the value of healthy.
>> After losing it, when they get old, they realize the value of health.
Also, people thrive to get money and fancy job to live well but air and water and sunlight are more important than them.
>> Also, people strive to get money and a fancy job to live well but air, water and sunlight are more important.
What I mean is that people don\'t try to do their best to get air, water, sunlight and so on so they don\'t value them in their routines.
>> What I mean is that people don\'t value air, water, sunlight and so on so they don\'t include them in their routines.
When they are in trouble because of them, they find that sometimes they didn\'t value the things they didn\'t work hard for.
>> When they are in trouble because of them, they realize that sometimes, they didn\'t value the things they didn\'t work hard for.
For these reaons, I think most people only value for the things that we work hard.
>> For these reasons, I think most people only value the things that they work hard for.
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