Do movies penetrate the deepest corner of one\'s soul?

2018-07-12 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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Perhaps it may depend on the person but I personally don\'t believe that movies really penetrate our souls. In my opinion, even though movies sometimes deal with serious problems in our lives and are powerful to send a message to viewers, movies are naturally created just for the entertainment and people mostly don\'t think in a serious way after watching it.

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Perhaps it may depend on the person but I personally don\'t believe that movies really penetrate our souls.

>> Perhaps, it may depend on the person but I personally don\'t believe that movies really penetrate our souls.

In my opinion, even though movies sometimes deal with serious problems in our lives and are powerful to send a message to viewers, movies are naturally created just for the entertainment and people mostly don\'t think in a serious way after watching it.

>> In my opinion, even though movies sometimes deal with serious problems in our lives and have powerful messages to viewers, movies are naturally created just for the entertainment and people mostly don\'t take them in a serious way after watching them.

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