Do my consumption habits destroy the habitat of other species?

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Yes. I produce lots of garbage whatever I do and somewhere I stay.

>> Yes, I produce lots of garbage whatever I do and wherever I stay.

In this morning, I put on makeup by using many kinds of cosmetic products which included micro plastic, and I wore clothes which are bought in SPA brand where the company have produced too much clothes and thrown away most of them because of trend. 

>> This morning, I put on make up by using many kinds of cosmetic products which includes micro plastic and I wore clothes which I bought from the brand SPA where the company have produced too many clothes and threw them away because they\'re out of style.

I watched a news that said the micro plastic is so harmful to not onle marine life but also human who eat them.

>> I watched the news and there I knew that micro plastic is so harmful not only to marine life but also for humans who\'ll eat them.

The straw and plastic cup are also made from micro plastic.

>> Straws and plastic cups are also made from micro plastic.

So, nowadays many cafes are not allowed to use plastic cup unless the customer take it out, and Starbucks offer paper straw instead of plastic one.

>> So, nowadays many cafes are not allowed to use plastic cups unless they\'re for take-outs and Starbucks offers paper straws instead of plastic ones.

And the cafes discount the cost if the customers bring their tumblers. 

>> Also, the cafes give discounts if the customers bring their own tumblers.

SPA brand is very sensitive to contemporary trend because it is directly connected to money.

>> CORRECT

So, they produce various fasion stuff and if the trend change. they throw away all of them.

>> So, they produce various fashion styles and if the trend changes, they throw all of them away.

If people consume not concerning it, the water pollution and air pollution would be getting worse.

>> If people consume without worrying about it then the water pollution and air pollution would get even worse.