Do newspapers, magazines, television, radio, movies, the Internet, and other media determine what is
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Media transmit a lot of information to most of us. Especially, news can cover people of all ages and internet has also progressed very fast for recent two decades.
As a nation has right to be informed, I consider that the medias have duty to inform, especially about important things to most people.
I c[이름]ot say media determine what is important news, but the important things are generally informed by media. And the important things are literally essential when taken an objective view.
Additionally, the news are becoming full of various fascinating topics nowadays.
For example, once, main character of one drama called ‘descendants of the sun’ emerged in 9pm news for interview. It was pretty fresh.
Whatever, media became indispensable factor in our life, and I like it.
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Hi there [이름]a! (^_^)
How are you doing today dear?
I hope you\'re doing great.
Thank you very much for writing in our composition board and sharing your opinion.
It is true that mass media has become an integral part of our daily lives.
With the marked improvement of telecommunications, the news now reach us in a very easy and convenient m[이름]er.
Even if we have very busy lives, we still manage to get ourselves updated with everything that\'s going on aroud us because of technology.
Most of us rely on these news. That\'s how powerful the media is.
And I guess there\'s some degree of truth in it when they said the media has the ability to dictate what is and what is not improtant to us.
I\'ll see you again on Wednesday [이름]a. Take care always. ^^
~Teacher Charry (^^,)
Media transmit a lot of information to most of us.
>> Media transmits a lot of information to most of us.
Especially, news can cover people of all ages and internet has also progressed very fast for recent two decades.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: News can easily reach people of all ages especially because the Internet has greatly progressed in the past two decades.
As a nation has right to be informed, I consider that the medias have duty to inform, especially about important things to most people.
>> As a nation has the right to be informed, I consider that the media has the duty to inform people about important things.
OR >> Becasue a nation has the right to be informed, it is the media\'s reponsibility to inform the people about important matters.
I c[이름]ot say media determine what is important news, but the important things are generally informed by media.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: I c[이름]ot say the media has the power to determine which news are important, but the important things are generally informed by the media.
And the important things are literally essential when taken an objective view.
>> And the important things are literally essential when taken in an objective view. Additionally, the news are becoming full of various fascinating topics nowadays.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> In addition to that, the news are becoming full of various fascinating topics these days.For example, once, main character of one drama called ‘descendants of the sun’ emerged in 9pm news for interview.
>> For example, the main character of the drama called \'Descendants of the Sun\' was featured in the 9pm news for an interview.
It was pretty fresh.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> It was pretty new. Whatever, media became indispensable factor in our life, and I like it.
>> The media became an indispensable factor in our lives and I like it.
OR >> The media has become an indispensable factor in our lives and I like it.
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