Do opportunities come by luck, or do we create them through effort?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the most opportunities come by effort. but the results of opportunities will be greater by luck.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jack,
I’m so happy to see you again!
Your answer was short but very clear. You shared a good idea, that most opportunities come from effort, but luck can make the results even better. That’s a strong and balanced opinion, and you expressed it in a simple, understandable way.
You’re doing well, Jack. Keep giving your thoughts like this, clear, direct, and meaningful.
~Teacher Cathy
I think the most opportunities come by effort. but the results of opportunities will be greater by luck.
>>I think most opportunities come from effort, but the results of those opportunities are made greater by luck.
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