Do parents in your country find time to steer clear of food hurting their kids?

2019-10-22 · 첨삭 강사 Joylin

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I don\'t know that I understand your question properly. Do the question means that parents in my country take care of their children? In my country, most parents are very busy because they are double income family. So, they haven\'t time to care of their children as much as one income family. However, there are many education institutions in my country like kindergarten, daycare center, and school. Education institutions normally provide a meal service. Thus, children can have balanced meal.

강사 첨삭

Hi Se [이름]!
Here are the corrections.
In my country, most parents are very busy because they are double income family.
>>Correct!
So, they haven\'t time to care of their children as much as one income family.
>>So, they have no time to take care for their children as much as one income family.
However, there are many education institutions in my country like kindergarten, daycare center, and school.
>>Correct!
Education institutions normally provide a meal service. Thus, children can have balanced meal.
>>Correct!

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