Do people accomplish more when they are allowed to do things their own way?

2015-11-16 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Psychologically, people tend to resist to orders or directions given by others naturally. However, they are willing to proceed and bring out much better outcomes when the decision is made on their own. People do not like to be intervened and be autonomous. So, we need to encourage and motivate people like your children or employees to do their own way, although there are times when they need some guidelines. Once the basic rules are given, we should allow them to try his/her own ways. Innovation only occurs when someone finds a different way to do something. Standard operating procedures dictate that things be done a certain way in a certain sequence. Sometimes "doing it my own way" hinders the total output of the system. However, we need to balance between letting them do their own ways and letting them not to derail completely, which can lead them to fail and get hurt seriously. Downside is that doing my own way without being considerate of others continuously can ruin your life.

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Psychologically, people tend to resist to orders or directions given by others naturally. 

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>> Better:Psychologically, people naturally tend to resist to orders or directions given by others.

However, they are willing to proceed and bring out much better outcomes when the decision is made on their own.

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People do not like to be intervened and be autonomous.

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So, we need to encourage and motivate people like your children or employees to do their own way, although there are times when they need some guidelines.

>> correct

Once the basic rules are given, we should allow them to try his/her own ways.

>> correct

Innovation only occurs when someone finds a different way to do something.

>> correct

Standard operating procedures dictate that things be done a certain way in a certain sequence.

>> correct

Sometimes \"doing it my own way\" hinders the total output of the system.

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However, we need to balance between letting them do their own ways and letting them not to derail completely, which can lead them to fail and get hurt seriously.

>> correct

Downside is that doing my own way without being considerate of others continuously can ruin your life.

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