Do people achieve greatness only by finding out what they are especially good at and developing that
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I think the greatness come from other people's respect.
People want to believe the greatness come from their selves. However if someone admire from other people, they can't feel their greatness.
There is a word, "the complement make a whale dance.".
If someone poor at doing something, people are not respect him/her. For example, Kim-Yuna is good at figure skating, so people respect her. Also, because Bill Gates invent the MS program, he can get a greatness from others. If they are poor at each others genre, people can't admire them.
So if someone really want to get a greatness, he/she must good at something.
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Hi, [이름]! (^^,)
It\'s Monday again.
Thank you very much for writing in our composition board.
I enjoyed reading your feedback. ^^
You have a point when you said, a person\'s greatness can be determined from the kind of respect he gets from others.
I\'ve been asking my self what really defines a person\'s greatness.
Is it his achievement? Is it his status? Is it the amount of money or the number of recognition that he has?
To me, greatness is how you use your talent to make other people\'s lives better.
People like Kim Yuna and Bill Gates are great because they are in competition with nobody but themselves.
They had a vision and they worked on that vision.
It\'s not that they don\'t fail or make mistakes.
It\'s about how they harness and use their talents to help and inspire other people to excel in their crafts.
It\'s about being a better person than you were yesterday.
Thank you for sharing your insights [이름]. It was a great reflection for me.
I hope you also felt the same.
Have a great day! Take care and God bless!
~Teacher Charry (^_^)
I think the greatness come from other people\'s respect.
>> I think greatness comes from other people\'s respect.People want to believe the greatness come from their selves.
>> People want to believe that their greatness is of their own doing.
However if someone admire from other people, they can\'t feel their greatness.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: However, when people don\'t recognize or appreciate your work or effort, you won\'t feel great as well.
There is a word, \"the complement make a whale dance.\".
>> There is a saying that goes this way, \"A compliment makes a whale dance.\"If someone poor at doing something, people are not respect him/her.
>> If someone is poor at doing something, people will not respect him/her.
For example, Kim Yuna is good at figure skating, so people respect her.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> For example, Kim Yuna is good at figure skating that\'s why people respect her.
Also, because Bill Gates invent the MS program, he can get a greatness from others.
>> Aside from that another example is Bill Gates, the man who invented the MS program and gained recognition from other out of it.
If they are poor at each others genre, people can\'t admire them.
>> If they are poor at each others genre, people won\'t admire them.
So if someone really want to get a greatness, he/she must good at something.
>> If someone really wants to achieve greatness, he/she must be good at something.
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