Do people have as much freedom as they would like in your country?
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It has not been long for Korea to enjoy the current level of freedom of speech, freedom of expression, freedom of the press, freedom of assembly, and freedom of association.
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Up until 1987, the military coups have occurred many times and the military dictators have seized power.
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The basic human rights and freedom have not been protected under the military dictatorship.
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Under the martial law, many universities which students staged anti-government campaigns and demonstrations were closed.
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Restrictions were placed on the press and political activities were banned.
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It was June 29, 1987 when Korea adopted the direct election system for the presidency for the first time in Korean history after facing a fierce protest by students and civilians.
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Many civilians and opposition law makers have risen against the dictatorship and been put in jail or killed during the democratization movement.
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Korea has advanced a lot in providing freedom, but there are still areas to be improved.
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