Do people in your country ever complain about tourists? Please explain your answer.

2019-10-04 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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I think that some people have some complains to tourists who are rude. There are several reasons. In my experience, when I go to shopping in myung-dong I saw tourists who cut in the line. Also one of them throw out trash on road. They do not care theirs behavior. I can not stand it at that time. Of course most of tourists is great. Also, if many tourist come to our country, our tourism industry is better. But I hope that they follow our rule

강사 첨삭

Good evening Mr. [이름]!

That\'s right, I noticed some tourists are rude and arrogant.

I sometimes just ignore them, as long as they are not causing me any problems at all.

Thank you very much for your answer and talk to you later!


Writing Task: Do people in your country ever complain about tourists? Please explain your answer.


I think that some people have some complains to tourists who are rude.
>>CORRECT!
 There are several reasons.
>>CORRECT!
 In my experience, when I go to shopping in myung-dong I saw tourists who cut in the line.
>>In my experience, a tourist cut in line when I was shopping in Myeong-dong.
Also one of them throw out trash on road.
>>Also, one of them throws trash on the road.
They do not care theirs behavior.
>>They don\'t care about their behavior.
I can not stand it at that time.
>>I can\'t stand it then.
Of course most of tourists is great.
>>Of course most tourists are great.
Also, if many tourist come to our country, our tourism industry is better.
>>Also, if many tourists come to our country, our tourism industry is better.
But I hope that they follow our rule
>>But I hope that they follow our rules.

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