Do people in your country worry too much about safety?
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Not really. I don\'t think most of people tend to worry about safety because I\'m pretty sure South Korea is the safest country in the world. Also, there are a lot of CCTVs when you come here to see that easily. But sometimes, the motiveless crime has been happened. It\'s called there\'s no reason murder. It\'s just a crime committed by someone you don\'t know on the street.
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Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Not really.
>> CORRECT!I don\'t think most of people tend to worry about safety because I\'m pretty sure South Korea is the safest country in the world.
>> I don\'t think most people tend to worry about safety because I\'m pretty sure South Korea is the safest country in the world.
Also, there are a lot of CCTVs when you come here to see that easily.
>> CORRECT!Also, there are a lot of CCTVs when you come here to see that easily.
But sometimes, the motiveless crime has been happened.
>> But sometimes, motiveless crimes happen.
It\'s called there\'s no reason murder.
>> It\'s called \"murder for no reason\".
It\'s just a crime committed by someone you don\'t know on the street.
>> CORRECT!
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