Do people in your culture show their emotions when communicating with others or do they hide some fe
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I think even Filipinos are not also good at hiding our feelings.
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Koreans are not used to showing their emotions when communicating with others.
>> Koreans are not used to show their emotions when communication with others.
But, they are not good at hiding their feelings, either.
>> Correct
>> OR: But it is difficult for them to hide their feelings either.
When expressing our feelings, we should be more descreet and sophisticate not to offend others because ohters\' feelings are as important as mine.
>> Did you mean: When expressing our feelings, we should be more discreet and sophisticated not to offend others because ohters\' feelings are as important as mine.
>> OR: When expressing our feelings, we should be more discreet and sophisticated not to offend others because others\' feelings are as important as ours.
At the same time, we need to make them understand how we feel as well rather than just keeping it to oourselves.
>> At the same time, we need to let them understand how we feel as well rather than just keeping it to ourselves.
Most Koreans are clumsy at expressing their feelings and often tend to suppress them until reaching the level that they cannot tolelate anymore.
>> Did you mean: Most Koreans are clumsy at expressing their feelings and often tend to suppress them until reaching the level that they cannot tolerate it anymore.
And they suddenly blow off steam rather than managing their emotions.
>> Correct
>> OR: They suddenly burst out their feelings.
In that sense, we can fairly say that most Korean people have a short temper and have not been trained how to properly express their feelings.
>> In that sense, we can fairly say that most Korean people are short tempered and have not been trained on how to properly express their feelings.
When it comes to expressing our emotions at work, the story becomes different because almost all Korean companies are based on a seniority system so that juniors can hardly challenge or show their emotions to their seniors in the workplace.
>> Did you mean: When it comes to expressing our emotions at work, the story becomes different because most Korean companies are based on a seniority system so, juniors can hardly challenge or show their emotions to their seniors in the workplace.
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