Do people need to compare themselves with others in order to appreciate what they have? Why or why n

2014-07-17 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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i dont think so. if we compared ourselve with others, in a way, we will be feel appreciate that of course. but if we start to compare ourselve with other, maybe we can't stop to so this is easy to be made habit. if we might get this habit, we bother about other's eyes everday. after all we can't have ourselve's life.

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i dont think so.

>>correct
 if we compared ourselve with others, 
in a way, we will be feel appreciate that of course.

>>If we compare ourselves with other, in some ways, we will appreciate that too.
 but if we start to compare ourselve with other, maybe we can\'t stop to 

>>But if we start comparing ourselves with others, maybe it will be hard for us to stop it.
 so this is easy to be made habit. 

>>That may become a bad habit.
 if we might get this habit, we bother about other\'s eyes everday.

>>If we might have this habit, we may bother other people.
 after all we can\'t have ourselve\'s life.

>>After all, we can\'t live someone else\'s lives.

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