Do people need to compare themselves with others in order to appreciate what they have? Why or why n
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i dont think so.
>>correct
if we compared ourselve with others, in a way, we will be feel appreciate that of course.
>>If we compare ourselves with other, in some ways, we will appreciate that too.
but if we start to compare ourselve with other, maybe we can\'t stop to
>>But if we start comparing ourselves with others, maybe it will be hard for us to stop it.
so this is easy to be made habit.
>>That may become a bad habit.
if we might get this habit, we bother about other\'s eyes everday.
>>If we might have this habit, we may bother other people.
after all we can\'t have ourselve\'s life.
>>After all, we can\'t live someone else\'s lives.
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