Do people need to "unlearn," or reject, many of their assumptions and ideas?

2015-10-27 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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I think we need to unlearn or reject many of our assumptions and ideas. Because, If we don't reject ideas or assumptions, we are not able to make a good decision. Sometimes even we can't make a good invention. Especially in the science area, all the inventions are made by reject of exist assumptions. For example, if Galileo Galilei didn't say "the earth still turn", we might believe the earth is not turning. Also, if we are not suspicious the assumption about the earth has round shape, we might still believe out the earth is square. If we are not unlearn all about the ideas, especially in the marketing area we can't find a good solution for our client. But in that case, we have to be polite. It doesn't mean ignoring. That ideas also the part of brainstorming, we have to reconsider all about the ideas.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! (^^,) Thank you very much for this composition. You are amazing! In my opinion, sometimes it\'s good to unlearn things in order to grow. There\'s this thing we call \"comfort zone\", where people dwell and stay in because it\'s comfortable. You don\'t have to make an effort to learn new things when you are in this zone. Most of the time this causes a person to procrastinate and get stuck in the same place. Unlearning things allows a person to get out of his comfort zone and discover new ideas and see new horizons. Nothing is discovered by accident in this world. Discoveries come with work and those discoveries would depend on how much you are willing to get out of your comfort zone. Delving and using the knowledge we\'ve acquired from other people is a good thing but sometimes it could result to laziness and procrastination. Before I say goodbye, I would like to share this beautiful quote: \"Discovery consists of seeing what everyone else has seen and thinking what no one else has thought. ~Albert Szent-Gyorgi I hope you have a wonderful day [이름]! See you again tomorrow. Take care and God bless! ~Teacher Charry (^^,)  I think we need to unlearn or reject many of our assumptions and ideas. >> CORRECT! OR >> In my opinion, we should unlearn or reject many of our assumptions and ideas. Because, If we don\'t reject ideas or assumptions, we are not able to make a good decision. >> It\'s because, If we don\'t reject our ideas or assumptions, we will not able to make a good decision. Sometimes even we can\'t make a good invention. >> Sometimes we can\'t come up with a good invention. Especially in the science area, all the inventions are made by reject of exist assumptions. >> Especially in the field of science area, all the inventions made were rejected by existing assumptions. For example, if Galileo Galilei didn\'t say \"the earth still turn\", we might believe the earth is not turning. >> For example, if Galileo Galilei didn\'t say \"the earth is turning\", we might still believe that the earth is not turning. Also, if we are not suspicious the assumption about the earth has round shape, we might still be believing that the earth is square. >> Also, if we were not suspicious about the assumption that the earth is round, we might still be believing that the earth is square. If we are not unlearn all about the ideas, especially in the marketing area we can\'t find a good solution for our client. >> If we do not unlearn all about the past ideas that we have, especially in the marketing area, we can\'t find a good solution for our client. But in that case, we have to be polite. >> CORRECT! OR >> However, in that instance we still have to be polite. It doesn\'t mean ignoring. >> It doesn\'t mean that you are going to ignore the current ideas. That ideas also the part of brainstorming, we have to reconsider all about the ideas. >> Those ideas are also part of brainstorming and we have to reconsider all about the other ideas.

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