Do people\'s leisure time activities change as they get older? How?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes. they do. To give an example from my situation, when I was younger than now, I usually play soccer in my leisure time. I was an energetic person. I can\'t play soccer now. I try to find out a cafe which has nice view and tasty coffee, and I am willing to visit the cafe to drink coffee.
I think that I have been changing naturally. When I enjoyed playing soccer, I was worried about getting hurt. To find cafes is good for my family.
I go to the cafe with family.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Kevin!
Hmm. I think you\'re right. Sometimes it depends on our physical abilities to do our hobbies. As time goes by, our taste in things differ too. ^^
~ Trixia
Content:
Yes. they do.
- Yes, they do.
To give an example from my situation, when I was younger than now, I usually play soccer in my leisure time.
- To give an example of my situation, when I was younger, I usually played soccer in my leisure time.
I was an energetic person.
- CORRECT.
I can\'t play soccer now.
- CORRECT.
I try to find out a cafe which has nice view and tasty coffee, and I am willing to visit the cafe to drink coffee.
- I try to find a cafe that has a nice view and tasty coffee, and I am willing to visit the cafe to drink coffee.
I think that I have been changing naturally.
- CORRECT.
When I enjoyed playing soccer, I was worried about getting hurt.
- CORRECT.
To find cafes is good for my family.
- Finding cafes is good for my family.
I go to the cafe with family.
- I go to the cafe with my family.
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