Do people's personalities change depending on who they're with?

2015-10-28 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I agree on the point that people’s personalities change depending on who they’re with. For instance, people tend to behave nicely to their opposite sex. Especially most women are prudish when they are with her male friends, although they act like themselves when they are with their female friends. Many married couples complain that their spouses have changed a lot after getting married. However, it’s not true. They have not changed, but simply started showing their real selves that have not been revealed before the marriage. We often try to be good persons to someone who are not close. However, we feel comfortable and behave less carefully when we are with close people such as our family and friends. We all act much nicer to our supervisors at work, whereas behave mean to our subordinates. Let’s suppose that you meet a buyer to sell your products or service. Then, you will try to act as best as you can. It means we all behave carefully when we are with important people.

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I agree on the point that people’s personalities change depending on who they’re with.

>> correct

For instance, people tend to behave nicely to their opposite sex.

>> correct

Especially most women are prudish when they are with her male friends, although they act like themselves when they are with their female friends.

>> correct

Many married couples complain that their spouses have changed a lot after getting married.

>> correct

However, it’s not true.

>> correct

They have not changed, but simply started showing their real selves that have not been revealed before the marriage.

>> correct

We often try to be good persons to someone who are not close.

>> correct

However, we feel comfortable and behave less carefully when we are with close people such as our family and friends.

>> correct

We all act much nicer to our supervisors at work, whereas behave mean to our subordinates.

>> correct

Let’s suppose that you meet a buyer to sell your products or service.

>> correct

Then, you will try to act as best as you can.

>> correct

It means we all behave carefully when we are with important people.

>> correct

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