Do people's personalities change depending on who they're with?
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I agree on the point that people’s personalities change depending on who they’re with.
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For instance, people tend to behave nicely to their opposite sex.
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Especially most women are prudish when they are with her male friends, although they act like themselves when they are with their female friends.
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Many married couples complain that their spouses have changed a lot after getting married.
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However, it’s not true.
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They have not changed, but simply started showing their real selves that have not been revealed before the marriage.
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We often try to be good persons to someone who are not close.
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However, we feel comfortable and behave less carefully when we are with close people such as our family and friends.
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We all act much nicer to our supervisors at work, whereas behave mean to our subordinates.
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Let’s suppose that you meet a buyer to sell your products or service.
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Then, you will try to act as best as you can.
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It means we all behave carefully when we are with important people.
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