Do people truly benefit from hardship and misfortune?
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I think that people truly benefit from hardship and misfortune.
If someone always success about everything, he/she might do not try hard and also can't get any worthwhile from work. Many inventions also from failure.
For example, The glue note such as post-it, it was developed from failure. Inventor want make strong glue, but he failed. However he change his mind from failure to success. He applied it to memo note. That failure bring big success to him. In other case, Steve Jobs also suffer from a lot of failures. Since he had experienced misfortunes, He could big success. If there are always happy things in his life, he might try to hard to achieve his goals continuously.
As the result of the hardship, we can feel he happiness.
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Hi, [이름]! (^^,)
I hope you\'re feeling better.
Failure is definitely not the end.
Failure does not bring an end to the desire of success nor does it mean that it\'s time to give up.
The fear of failure holds back a lot of people from pursuing their dreams and attaining success.
Ralph Waldo Emerson once said that, \"Our greatest glory is not in never failing, but in rising up every time we fall.\"
There are many renown individuals who started with nothing and encountered a lot of obstacles, yet they overcame them.
Albert Einstein, did not speak until he was four years old.
His parents thought he was abnormal.
He was expelled from school and his teachers described him as \"mentally slow\".
To this date, he is considered to be the most celebrated scientist of the century.
Michael Jordan was cut from his highschool basketball team for a \"lack of skill\".
Ironic isn\'t it? Considering the record and history he\'s made in the NBA league.
No player has surpassed his record in the court so far when it comes to offense and defense.
Bill Gates was a Harvard University drop-out and his first business, Tral-O-Data was a failure.
After that, he didn\'t give up and proceeded to make one of the world\'s biggest computer software today called Microsoft.
Ofcourse, who can forget Thomas Edison?
Thomas Edison developed the first light bulb!
However, there was a time in Edison\'s life when his teachers actually told him that he is too stupid to learn anything.
Harsh, right? If it wasn\'t for him, we\'d still be living in darkness.
The people I have mentioned here are just a few from the very long list of famous failures.
I\'d like to quote Zig Ziglar: \"Remember that failure is an event, not a person.\"
Failure is one of the things we humans try best to avoid.
No one likes to fail. Many people will avoid doing something that they\'re scared of because they are afraid of failing.
I have been guilty of being that type of person and for the past year, I came to realize that failing is part of success.
I hope you were able to reflect from this as much as I did.
Have a wonderful day [이름]!
See you again tomorrow. ^^
~Teacher Charry (^^,)
I think that people truly benefit from hardship and misfortune.
>> I think people truly benefit from hardships and misfortunes.
If someone always success about everything, he/she might do not try hard and also can\'t get any worthwhile from work.
>> If someone always succeeds in everything, he/she might not do her best and might not get anything worthwhile from his/her work.
Many inventions also from failure.
>> Many inventions started from one failure to another. For example, The glue note such as post-it, it was developed from failure.
>> For example, the glue note, which is known as \"post-it\" today, started from a failure.
Inventor want make strong glue, but he failed.
>> The inventor wanted to make a strong glue but he failed.
However he change his mind from failure to success.
>> However, he change his mind about it and later on succeeded.
He applied it to memo note.
>> He applied the concept to memo notes.
That failure bring big success to him.
>> That failure brought him great success.
In other case, Steve Jobs also suffer from a lot of failures.
>> Another case was that of Steve Jobs who also suffered from a lot of failures.
Since he had experienced misfortunes, He could big success.
>> He learned from his series of misfortunes and later on became successful.
If there are always happy things in his life, he might try to hard to achieve his goals continuously.
>> If we always experience happiness, we might not try hard to continuosly strive and achieve our goals.
As the result of the hardship, we can feel he happiness.
>> The hardships that we experience can give us happiness later on in life.
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