Do people work long hours in your country?
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Isn\'t it obvious? absolutely yes. South Korea is the most long hours to work around the world. I guess it\'s 42 hours a week. I still remember the government tried to change it from 42 to 69 hours. Fortunately, it didn\'t work. And, I\'m sure people work 5 or 6 days a week in only Korea. It\'s not efficient because people work only 4 days a week in other countries. The government seems like very stupid and pathetic. They don\'t know why the birth rate has gone down 0.6% last year, just they can see things in front of them even if it\'s an illusion. So, I regret I didn\'t decide to leave there faster. :)
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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Isn\'t it obvious? absolutely yes.
>> CORRECT!South Korea is the most long hours to work around the world.
>> South Korea has the longest working hours around the world.
I guess it\'s 42 hours a week.
>> CORRECT!I still remember the government tried to change it from 42 to 69 hours.
>> CORRECT!Fortunately, it didn\'t work.
>> CORRECT!And, I\'m sure people work 5 or 6 days a week in only Korea.
>> And, I\'m sure people work 5 or 6 days a week only in Korea.
It\'s not efficient because people work only 4 days a week in other countries.
>> CORRECT!The government seems like very stupid and pathetic.
>> CORRECT!They don\'t know why the birth rate has gone down 0.6% last year, just they can see things in front of them even if it\'s an illusion.
>> CORRECT!So, I regret I didn\'t decide to leave there faster. :)
>> CORRECT!
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