Do pregnant women in your country work?
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Imposing such rules for pregnant women is such a relief. Not only it would help them be convenient at work, but also helping them to keep track of their health. Of course, there are consequences like decreasing their work loads that could affect some employees in the workplace, but that\'s part of the cycle and the responsibility of each individual. You\'re a learner, Sir [이름]! Keep on writing.
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Women in Korea could not use maternity leave few years ago, but most company has allowed women to use their leave before their delivery these day.
>>> Women in Korea could not use maternity leave few years ago, but most companies have allowed women to use their leave before their delivery these days.
People have been interesting about the health of the mother so that they have agreed pregnant women to have a break time during their duty.
>>> People have been interested about the health of mothers so they have agreed that pregnant women must have a break during their duty.
Pregnant women can take two hours off from the first month of the pregnancy to four month and from eight to the time they will deliver baby.
>>> Pregnant women can take two hours off from the first month of pregnancy until the time of their delivery.
Even though. we have a system for pregnant women, social unions would like to expand break time for whole period of pregnancy.
>>> Even though, we have a system for pregnant women, social unions would like to expand break time for the whole period of pregnancy.
However, It is not simple thing, because people at work have to share the work without additional staffing.
>>> However, It is not a simple thing, because employees have to share the task without additional staffing.
The reason is not reasonable, if workers request to hire staff for 2 hours working and it is almost impossible to find the person who are willing to work only 2 hours a day.
>>> The reason is not reasonable, if workers request to hire a part-timer for 2 hours then it would be almost impossible to find a person who are willing to work for only 2 hours a day.
Anyway, I think the trend of welfare in Korea is going to be good way and we have to implement more welfare in our society.
>>> Anyway, I think the trend of welfare in Korea is going to be good and that, we have to implement more welfare in our society.
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