Do prisoners deserve the right to vote? Why or why now?
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강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Lion!
Thanks for your answer. I like how open minded you are.
You also provided enough grounds to justify your opinion. Good job!
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Amanda:0
It is not easy to answer.
>> Correct
>> OR: That\'s a hard question to answer.
I think that the vote means deciding method or ways of life.
>> I think vote means having the option to decide on what kind of life you want to lead.
* What I mean with my question is the right of suffrage or the right to vote in a political election.
People who harms other people have right to decide life of others?
>> Should people who harmed other people be given the right to decide the life of others?
Even though I think no, prisoners have right to vote. Because, prisoner is not prisoner from birth.
>>I\'m against with the idea, but objectively, I think prisoners have the right to vote because they are not born as prisoners.
They are criminal, and they are victim of irrational social system.
>> They are criminals, but they are also victims of the irrational social system.
>> OR: Yes, they are criminals, but some of them are probably victims of social injustice.
If they are supported before they are hungry. They did not rob the bakery.
>> If they have been supported when they were hungry, they shouldn\'t have robbed the bakery.
If they are well educated that committing crime is really wrong. They did not commit a crime.
>> If they have been educated enough about the repercussions of committing crimes, they probably haven\'t engaged in any criminal acts.
If they are loved. The rate of committing crime is extremely low.
>> If they were loved and supported, the crime rate is probably low.
Even if there are psychopath who was born to bad. It is not reasonable that Whole group of prisoner don`t have right to vote due to few people who are not qualified.
>> Even if some of those prisoners are probably psychopath who were born to bad, it is unreasonable for all prisoners to be deprived of their right to vote. The fault of the minority, shouldn\'t be shouldered by the majority.
Most people has right to change their life. For themselves, The prisoner have right to vote.
>> People have the right to change their life. Prisoners are people. Prisoners should be allowed to exercise their right to vote.
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