Do professional athletes get paid too much? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think professional athletes get paid too much but it\'s worth it.
Most people love watching sport games and some of them dream to be a athlete.
Like this, sports can influence our lives.
And many companies sponsor sports and invest to athletes.
There are a lot of reasons why they get paid a lot, but not every professional athletes get paid a lot.
Only a very few can get paid a lot, and else cannot.
강사 첨삭
Your answer shows balanced thinking by acknowledging both sides — that professional athletes earn high salaries but also deserve them because of their influence and entertainment value. You also made a strong point that only a small number of athletes actually earn very high incomes, which adds depth to your argument. Your ideas are logical and well-organized, moving from public interest to sponsorship and income differences. To improve, focus on plural forms, prepositions like \"invest in,\" and more natural expressions such as \"dream of beco[이름]g.\" Overall, your response is thoughtful, balanced, and clearly explained, great job!
-Teacher Wela
Most people love watching sport games and some of them dream to be a athlete.
>> Most people love watching sports games, and some of them dream of beco[이름]g athletes.
Like this, sports can influence our lives.
>> In this way, sports can influence our lives.
And many companies sponsor sports and invest to athletes.
>> Many companies sponsor sports and invest in athletes.
There are a lot of reasons why they get paid a lot, but not every professional athletes get paid a lot.
>> There are many reasons why they get paid a lot, but not every professional athlete earns a high salary.
Only a very few can get paid a lot, and else cannot.
>> Only a very few athletes get paid a lot, and the others do not.
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