Do reality television shows accurately depict real life? Why or why not?
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No. It\'s because today\'s reality television shows are focusing on making advertisement. I think it is money\'s power. It\'s like the past\'s reality television shows were depict whose real life, but nowadays, many people think the moneys are more important than to show whose real life. It is little bit sad happening. Today\'s reality television shows look like awkward. Casts are trying to show their advertisement.
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Good afternoon Daisy. :)
Thank you for sharing your opinion about this matter.
I agree that reality shows these days don\'t really show the reality. They are usually scripted which is sad because the show is being manipulated.
Thank you for sharing your opinion about this matter.
I agree that reality shows these days don\'t really show the reality. They are usually scripted which is sad because the show is being manipulated.
Anyhow, I hope you having a great afternoon.
See you in class later. ^^
~Teacher Charry
See you in class later. ^^
~Teacher Charry
>> No, they don\'t.
It\'s because today\'s reality television shows are focusing on making advertisement.
>> CORRECT!
I think it is money\'s power.
>> CORRECT!
It\'s like the past\'s reality television shows were depict whose real life, but nowadays, many people think the moneys are more important than to show whose real life.
>> [Do you mean]: It\'s not like the past\'s reality television shows where they depicted real life situation. Nowadays, many people think the money is more important than showing what\'s happening in real life.
It is little bit sad happening.
>> What\'s happening is a little / bit sad.
Today\'s reality television shows look like awkward.
>> Today\'s reality television shows look awkward.
Casts are trying to show their advertisement.
>> Casts are trying to advertise themselves.
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