Do we need other people in order to understand ourselves?
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Good afternoon, Sir [이름]!
Happy Thursday. ^^
How are you today?
I hope you feel better today than yesterday.
In my case, I am suffering from sore throat, colds and cough.
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I will do my best to be a good teacher even if I feel bad. ^^
Thanks for an inspiring essay again.
We should be thankful for what we have.
Have a great day.
Teacher Nina
Yes, we need other people in order to understand ourselves better.
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We sometimes don’t realize how blessed and fortunate we are because we are just used to living this way.
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We often become realize and be touched when we see or hear stories about the people who live successful lives by overcoming various difficulties.
>> We often realize and be touched when we see or hear stories about the people who live a successful lives by overcoming various difficulties.
There is a Chinese proverb that in order to be happy, don’t look up to wealth people only but look at the people who make all their efforts to make a living.
>> There is a Chinese proverb that in order to be happy, don’t look up only to wealthy people but look at the people who make all their efforts to make a living.
The poor on TV looks a happiest person although they owe less than us.
>> The poor on TV looks the happiest person although they owe less than us.
Moreover, we often fail to assess ourselves objectively.
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We are quite generous to ourselves, so we have blind eyes to our shortcomings.
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We can change our self-conception when we see ourselves through other’s eyes.
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Part of the discrepancy arises because the outsiders’ perspective affords information you yourself miss.
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By soliciting feedback from other people, we can learn more about ourselves and how we\'re coming off.
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We\'re are biased by our need.
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