Do we need to be honest all the time?
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I think we don’t need to be honest all the time. Rather we should know how to lie and sometimes there are some situation that we have to lie. But too much lie cause problems. We should know not to be honest in the right way.
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I think we don’t need to be honest all the time.
>>CORRECT
Rather we should know how to lie and sometimes there are some situation that we have to lie.
>> We should rather know when to lie because there are some situations where we need to lie.
But too much lie cause problems.
>> Although, too much lying would cause problems.
We should know not to be honest in the right way.
>> CORRECT
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