Do weather conditions affect any of your hobbies? What activities can’t you do if the weather isn’t
학생이 쓴 원문
Weather is important for out side activities.
It\'s also important a hobby.
I am interested in the weather forecast and decide what to do.
I mainly play golf, but I don\'t do it when it\'s cold.
So, in winter in Korea, we go to other countries with high temperatures.
When the weather is hot, I can rain for a while during exercise.
When the weather doesn\'t make my hobby, golf, I meet with friends.
Chatting at a coffee shop or going to a movie theater
Weather has a big impact on our behavior, and as soon as we wake up, seeing the weather forecast is one of our routines.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! You got it right. Weather absolutely has a big impact in our lives. May you have a bright and sunny day!~~T.Dee
>>Weather is important when doing outdoor activities.
It\'s also important a hobby.
>>It\'s also important when doing a hobby.
I am interested in the weather forecast and decide what to do.
I am interested in the weather forecast and decide what to do.
>>I am interested in the weather forecast and decide what to do.
I mainly play golf, but I don\'t do it when it\'s cold.
I mainly play golf, but I don\'t do it when it\'s cold.
>>CORRECT!
So, in winter in Korea, we go to other countries with high temperatures.
So, in winter in Korea, we go to other countries with high temperatures.
>>In South Korea during winter, we go to other countries which has higher temperatures.
When the weather is hot, I can rain for a while during exercise.
When the weather is hot, I can rain for a while during exercise.
>>When the weather is hot, I can run outside for a while during my exercise.
When the weather doesn\'t make my hobby, golf, I meet with friends.
When the weather doesn\'t make my hobby, golf, I meet with friends.
>>When the weather doesn\'t allow me to do my hobby, which is golf, I meet with friends.
Chatting at a coffee shop or going to a movie theater
Chatting at a coffee shop or going to a movie theater
>>We chat at a coffee shop or go to a movie theater.
Weather has a big impact on our behavior, and as soon as we wake up, seeing the weather forecast is one of our routines.
Weather has a big impact on our behavior, and as soon as we wake up, seeing the weather forecast is one of our routines.
>>CORRECT!
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