Do women face more barriers to succeeding in business than men?
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I don\'t know about business and female businessman\'s circumstance neither. But I guess in business it is important to give trust and make good image to others so stereotype for women can be a bigger barrier especially in business. So I think women can face more barriers in business.
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I don\'t know about business and female businessman\'s circumstance neither.
>>I don\'t know about business and businesswomen\'s circumstances either.
But I guess in business it is important to give trust and make good image to others so stereotype for women can be a bigger barrier especially in business.
>> But I guess in business, it is important to build trust and create a positive image, so gender stereotypes can be a significant barrier, especially in business.
So I think women can face more barriers in business.
>>Correct
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