Do works of art have the power to change people's lives?

2018-11-15 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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I think works of art don't have the power to change people's lives. First of all, works of art are artifical that is not usually from real stories. What I mean is that works of art are man-made so people can get impressed from them. However, it cannot influence their life becasue everyone knows that the writers made them artificially. Usually works of art are too fantastic rather than realistic so it doesn't work in the real world. Also, works of art are limited to explain lives of whole world. For example, since they are not real stories, the writers should make borders to express them. It means works of art have their own limitations but the world we live has no limitations that our lives don't finish for short time like moives or books. For these reasons, I think works of art don't have the power to change people's lives but they can affect people's lives a little bit.

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I think works of art don\'t have the power to change people\'s lives.

>> CORRECT!
First of all, works of art are artifical that is not usually from real stories.

>> First of all, works of art are artificial and are not usually from real stories.

What I mean is that works of art are man-made so people can get impressed from them.

>> CORRECT!

However, it cannot influence their life becasue everyone knows that the writers made them artificially.

>> CORRECT!

Usually works of art are too fantastic rather than realistic so it doesn\'t work in the real world.

>> Usually, works of art are too fantastic rather than realistic so it doesn\'t work in the real world.
Also, works of art are limited to explain lives of whole world.

>> Also, works of art are limited to explain living conditions in the whole world.

For example, since they are not real stories, the writers should make borders to express them.

>> CORRECT!

It means works of art have their own limitations but the world we live has no limitations that our lives don\'t finish for short time like moives or books.

>> It means works of art have their own limitations but the world we live in has no limitations. Our lives don\'t last for a short time unlike in movies or books.
For these reasons, I think works of art don\'t have the power to change people\'s lives but they can affect people\'s lives a little bit.

>> For these reasons, I think works of art don\'t have the power to change people\'s lives but they can affect people\'s lives a little.

OR >> For these reasons, I think works of art don\'t have the power to change people\'s lives but they can affect people\'s lives a bit. 

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