Do you agree or disagree that for an idea or goal to become a reality it takes a lot of hard work?

2015-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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I agree that for an idea or goal to become a reality it takes a lot of hard work. Unfortunately, If we can find an easy way to go to the goal, we might go that rought. However, if we always take the easy way, we can't feel proud ourselves. After take that hard period, we are eligible to achieve the goal and also we can learn a lot of thing from that process. For example, to take a good score at TOEIC test, we went to the academy to learn how to solve this problem. Even if we can get the great score, we can't speak and write an English well. That is the most the big problem.

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  A beautiful Wednesday to you [이름]! ^^ Thank you for once again writing in our composition board. You\'ve probably heard of the saying: \"Nothing worth having, comes easy.\" There is just way too much competition and too many people who are just as motivated as you are. You must fight and scrap for everything that you want. Go out there and get it. Life isn’t always about the endgame. While meeting goals is surely satisfying, it’s important to strive constantly for new things. It is the journey: all the obstacles we have endured and surmounted in order to achieve our goal. That makes us the people we are today. The journey is the experience that makes us better. So if everything worth having came easy, it probably isn’t worth the effort or time. Success is the result of hard work. The grueling tests you are forced to endure to achieve success determines the strength of your passion. Is success something that you want, or something that you need? I have realized a lot of things in this composition. I hope you have a wonderful day [이름]. See you again tomorrow. Take care always. ~Teacher Charry I agree that for an idea or goal to become a reality it takes a lot of hard work. >> CORRECT! OR >> I agree that in order for an idea or a goal to happen, it would take a lot of hard work. Unfortunately, If we can find an easy way to go to the goal, we might go that rought. >> Unfortunately, if we find a goal easy to reach, we might not pursue it. However, if we always take the easy way, we can\'t feel proud ourselves. >> If we always take the easy way, we won\'t feel proud of our ourselves and our accomplishments. After take that hard period, we are eligible to achieve the goal and also we can learn a lot of thing from that process.>> Whe we take the difficult road to achieve our goals, it is possible for us to attain it and learn a lot from the process. For example, to take a good score at TOEIC test, we went to the academy to learn how to solve this problem. >> For example, to have a good score in a TOEIC test, we have to go to the academy and learn how to get a good score.   Even if we can get the great score, we can\'t speak and write an English well. >> Even if we get great scores, we can\'t speak and write English well. That is the most the big problem. >> That is the biggest problem.  

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