Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? "Parents are the best teachers."

2016-11-21 · 첨삭 강사 Megan

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I disagree with the statement "parents are the best teacher" For children, before they enter the school, they might raised and taught by their parents. During that period, I agree that parents are the best teachers since parents might help children to build their own character. But after child enter the school, they will spend most of days with their teachers and friends. So children probably influenced by the people in their school. Therefore, I strongly believe that the environment they surrouned will influence them a lot and it could be a best teacher for them.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!! Monday feels is still here. I really appreciate you for taking time to answer your homework.   You are a great writer and I believe that you can do great with your compositions. I encourage you to be more confident in your answers not only on speaking but in writing as well. It is okay to use \"might\" in your sentences. However since you didn\'t give reasons to explain why you used might in the sentence it sounded that you are unsure.   You can give me your opinions about this on our class this Wednesday!!   I hope this week finds you well!! See you!!   ~ Teacher Megan~   HERE ARE MY CORRECTIONS: I disagree with the statement \"parents are the best teacher\">> Correct.OR>> I oppose the statement \"parents are the best teacher.\"   For children, before they enter the school, they might raised and taught by their parents. >> For childeren, before they enter school they are raised and taught by their parents and guardians. OR>> For children, before they entering, they are raised and taught by their parents.   During that period, I agree that parents are the best teachers since parents might help children to build their own character.>> During that period, I agree that parents and guardians are the best teachers since they help children to build their own character.   But after child enter the school, they will spend most of days with their teachers and friends. >> But after a child started going to school, they will be spending most of their days with their teachers and friends. OR>> But after a child started going to school, , they will be exposing themselves to their teachers and friends.   So children probably influenced by the people in their school.>> So they are probably influenced by the people in their school.   Therefore, I strongly believe that the environment they surrouned will influence them a lot and it could be a best teacher for them. >> Therefore, I strongly believe that the environment that surrounds them will influence them a lot and it could be a best teacher for them.

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