Do you agree or disagree with the idea that the most beautiful things cannot be seen?
학생이 쓴 원문
I agree that the most beautiful things can’t be seen.
Beauty can be seen in things like a sunset or an actress. but some things cannot be seen.
For example, parents’ love for their kids.
Kindness of heart toward strangers who need help.
I think the most beautiful things cannot be seen, just felt.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Sunny! You can write basic words and sentences. You can also use basic grammar correctly. You are improving with steady practice. Good job. See you in class. ~Teacher Jane :)
I agree that the most beautiful things can’t be seen.
>> CORRECT
Beauty can be seen in things like a sunset or an actress. but some things cannot be seen.
>> Beauty can be seen in things like a sunset or an actress, but some things cannot be seen.
For example, parents’ love for their kids. Kindness of heart toward strangers who need help.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: For example, parents’ love for their kids or the kindness toward strangers who need help.
I think the most beautiful things cannot be seen, just felt.
>> CORRECT
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