Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above?
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I agree with this quotation because I think that when people succeed then reason, most of it is because of effort.
I think when people are successful, they can have explosive energy if they add the right timing and luck in the middle of thier efforts.
Sciencist Edison said, \"Genius is made with 99% effort and 1% inspiration.\"
It means that in order to achieve great results, it takes place in the process of constantly striving while failing a lot.
This is the result of Marin Curie, who discovered radium, also made numerous failures and efforts to discover radium.
Wouldn\'t there be ridiculous things happening where many people try to catch the intangible nonsense of luck if they succeed only with luck without trying?
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I agree with this quotation because I think that when people succeed then reason, most of it is because of effort.
I think when people are successful, they can have explosive energy if they add the right timing and luck in the middle of thier efforts.
I think when people are successful, they can have explosive energy if they add the right timing and luck in the middle of thier efforts.
>>I think when people are successful, they can have explosive energy if they add the right timing and luck in the middle of their efforts.
Sciencist Edison said, \"Genius is made with 99% effort and 1% inspiration.\"
>>Scientist Edison said, \"Genius is made with 99% effort and 1% inspiration.\"
It means that in order to achieve great results, it takes place in the process of constantly striving while failing a lot.
This is the result of Marin Curie, who discovered radium and also made numerous failures and efforts to discover radium.
Wouldn\'t there be ridiculous things happening where many people try to catch the intangible nonsense of luck if they succeed only with luck without trying?
This is the result of Marin Curie, who discovered radium and also made numerous failures and efforts to discover radium.
Wouldn\'t there be ridiculous things happening where many people try to catch the intangible nonsense of luck if they succeed only with luck without trying?
>>Correct
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