Do you agree or disagree with tje following statement? Most experienses in our lives that seemed dif
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Thank you for submitting your homework and for sharing your opinion. I totally agree that difficult experiences help us to become better and more successful persons. It helps us reflect on ourselves. ^^
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I agree with valuable lessons in our lives that seemed difficult. We noticed a real-life and catched the solution in various situation.
I think that smooth way isn\'t of help to our. Because,If we didn\'t fall down anything, we couldn\'t about what is a wound and scar.
For example, Before getting a job, I can\'t count to fall down my resume. Even if I passed a first process, I couldn\'t make a secound process that interview is proceeded with face to face.
I studied that the reason of interviewers are failed me.
Finally, I got a job. I think it\'s valuable experiences that I reflect on myself by falling down.
>> I agree that valuable lessons can be learned from experiences that seemed difficult. We are able to notice real life scenarios and learn the solutions to various situations. I think having a smooth life wouldn\'t help us. Because if we didn\'t fall down on anything, we wouldn\'t know about wound and scars. For example, before getting a job, I can\'t count how many times I fell down with my resume. Even if I passed the first stage, I couldn\'t make it through the second where I have to undergo a face to face interview.
I studied the reasons why the interviewers failed me.
Finally, I got a job. I think those were valuable experiences so that I can reflect on myself.
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