Do you agree that a person should never tell a lie?
학생이 쓴 원문
I believe a lie is necessary for the world. Because if whole people to tell the truth then dispute keep happening. a lie is necessary for a peaceful world.
강사 첨삭
Great [이름]!
What you wrote here is actually true! If everyone is honest, then maybe our world will really be chaotic.
-T. Caitlyn
I believe a lie is necessary for the world. Because if whole people to tell the truth then dispute keep happening. >> I believe lies are necessary in our world because if everyone will tell the truth, disputes will keep happening.
a lie is necessary for a peaceful world.
>> Lying is necessary for a peaceful world.
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