Do you agree that age is just a number?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think age is just a number. Absolutely, there are differences depending on age like appearance, power, health etc. However, there is no limit in the capacity. Most people think that the seniors have difficulty adapting media and information society. But it isn\'t true. Even some of the old operate youtube channels and they distract people\'s attention. They give wise advice to young generation, and it leads to harmony between generations. Also, over 70 years old woman applied college ability test in 2020 and it was shocking to people who set their limits. The new things come out fast, so they just need some time to adapt. Even though the young\'s pace of handling work is faster than the old\'s pace, the senior\'s wisdom and solving problem skills are outstanding. We must not consider them as weak and boring people. I want all of people want to challenge what they want to do and achieve their dream. It will exactly prove that age is just a number.
강사 첨삭
Thanks for this Mary. Yes, I hope you still continue taking interest in experiencing new things and challenging yourself no matter what age you will be. Good luck!
I think age is just a number.
>>> correct
Absolutely, there are differences depending on age like appearance, power, health etc.
>>> correct
However, there is no limit in the capacity.
>>> correct
Most people think that the seniors have difficulty adapting media and information society.
>>> Most people think that the seniors have difficulty adapting to the media and information society.
But it isn\'t true.
>>> correct
Even some of the old operate youtube channels and they distract people\'s attention.
>>> OR: Even some of the old run Youtube channels and they attract people\'s attention.
They give wise advice to young generation, and it leads to harmony between generations.
>>> correct
Also, over 70 years old woman applied college ability test in 2020 and it was shocking to people who set their limits.
>>> Also, an over 70 years old woman applied to college aptitude test in 2020 and it was shocking to people who set their limits.
The new things come out fast, so they just need some time to adapt.
>>> correct
Even though the young\'s pace of handling work is faster than the old\'s pace, the senior\'s wisdom and solving problem skills are outstanding.
>>> correct
We must not consider them as weak and boring people.
>>> correct
I want all of people want to challenge what they want to do and achieve their dream.
>>> OR: I hope all young people have the desire to challennge themselves with what they want to do and achieve their dreams.
It will exactly prove that age is just a number.
>>> correct
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