Do you agree that childhood is the happiest time in life?
학생이 쓴 원문
I agree that childhood is the happiest time in life.
Because I play with my friends and siblings freely without any worries.
But I’m satisfied and happy now. I think having a advantage in present.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jenna, good day to you. It\'s good to remember when we were kids. We had a lot of time to play with our friends. I\'m glad that you still have a grateful heart even now. Stay happy. I will see you in class. Take care! ~ T. Lyn
I agree that childhood is the happiest time in life.
>>Correct.
Because I play with my friends and siblings freely without any worries.>>It is because I can play with my friends and siblings without any worries.
But I’m satisfied and happy now.
But I’m satisfied and happy now.
>>Correct.
I think having a advantage in present.
>>I think positively and make most of my life in the present.
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