Do you agree that Christmas is celebrated by CHRISTIANS only?
학생이 쓴 원문
Christmas is a celebration day. Everyone can enjoy with their family and friends. The end of year is all good for everybody. If someone wish something, it comes true at Christmas day.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I hope you enjoyed your Christmas party.
Talk to you soon!
Here are the corrections.
Christmas is a celebration day. Everyone can enjoy with their family and friends.
>>> Correct!
The end of year is all good for everybody. If someone wish something, it comes true at Christmas day.
>>> The end of the year is all good for everybody. If someone wishes something, it comes true on Christmas day.
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