Do you agree that dark chocolates are healthier than white chocolates? Why or why not?
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no i think it is going to be same because it is just same chocolate
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Thank you for your answer, [이름]! I was really happy to meet you yesterday. But, do you know that according to some studies, dark chocolates are healthier? Anyway, stay healthy and happy!-Faith-
no i think it is going to be same because it is just same chocolate
>> No. I think they are the same because they are both chocolates.
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